Is The Tone Of Your Copy Killing Your Sales?

Could the tone of your copy be turning your prospects off?

Advertising is salesmanship but great salesmen communicate and build rapport with their prospects in many different ways.

They don't stay in one key one volume like the "Crazy Warehouse Clearance Guy" in this humorous 1 minute video...

If you're using too much hype and too little genuine persuasion based on real facts...

If you're not keying into the emotional tone of your key prospects...

Then you could be coming across in an overbearing, off putting way just like the Crazy Warehouse Guy trying to run a clearance sale on God in a church.

Or in a library (1 minute video)...

Often we can even go overboard in the way we ask for the order.

Sometimes a well thought out low key call to action that resonates deeply with our prospect's emotions can be far more effective than screaming at your prospects to "BUY NOW AT THIS NEVER TO BE REPEATED PRICE".

Be human in your copy.

Why be loudmouthed in your copy when asking quietly can be more effective.

Don't come across like the crazy nut case in this one minute video...

Also read...
How To Grab Attention Without Over Hyped Language
A Powerful $20 Million Low Key Sales Presentation
Low Key Copywriting Sells
Is This Copywriting Mistake Killing Your Sales
Breaking Your Prospect's Sales Resistance Gary Halbert Video

Kindest regards,
Andrew Cavanagh

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